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Last author: moira hawthorne
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hawthorne's WIP CRITIQUE

WIP = work in progress - I need feed back!
will put art up here for artist critiques when I have it to show
Ill always put up the newest update here
so you are encouraged to watch this page

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Tsuki Bound!
it a running gag for years now
about what sort of bait should be used
to draw them to the trap and such

newest WIP stuff!

Sidekick name: The Bright Idea (muse as sidekick)
Strength: 2 physically 10 mentally
Superpower: Generates Inspiration Motivation and A General Lack of Attention to Common Sense Time or Mundane Obligations
Day Job: Unknown... where she disappears to Unknown
Background: Unknown... maybe created from leftovers at the begining of time itself
Hero She Works For: Alot! she is a real scamp and gets arould to many artists mothers
and anyone else who has ever spoken the words, "Another fine mess You've gotten me into!"
Yup every hero needs someone who gets him into trouble...

I had a great idea for the Valentine Art Competition

too bad I CANT enter it
it be me and Aodh together kissing
me as a photo... in other words real life...
and Aodh as a digital painting...

the theme is Forbidden Love

Forbidden b/c
1... we exist in two separate mediums...
and 2... b/c he is my alter ego...

I CANT enter it b/c...

5. SUBJECT MATTER AND MEDIUM:
Since the winners will be featured on Mainstreet, images that depict graphic violence, pornography or other disturbing actions will not be accepted. Only images that fit the theme will be allowed.

All mediums, except photography (and/or manipulations) and animated GIF's, will be accepted.

I love the idea of real world meets painted world..
me and Aodh meeting... and the reasons why its forbidden...

but ET doesnt

TOO BAD iM GONNA DO IT ANYWAYS...
FOR MYSELF

going to use this painting
of C'serio © Lanisaz [will be replaced by me]
and Aodh & art © moira hawthorne.
here is the photo-reference I used
http://www.photo.net/photo/pcd0155/gay-parade-21.jpg
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this still needs alot of work...
or I may get a better... in proportion photo taken

ok new photo of me... with better proportions to match Aodh
plus the colours are better
and you can see I decided to fade Aodh abit... as if he is more imaginary than real
STILL NEEDS ALOT OF WORK
got to fill in parts of Aodh's body that have/had C'serio
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Im entered in the ET Dark Arts Competition
in the art category ET Dark Arts entries

I reworked a painting of mine... its an old fav... but I never did think it was quite finished... what you think?

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added another skull
im not sure if its done now...
im tempted to add flames but that might be to much ..what you say?
I think I likes!

'Fate's Dark Balance'
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[moira hawthorne]'s wip wikis
hawthorne's WIP CRITIQUE - current WIP wiki
hawthorne's WIP basement - older WIP wiki incomplete art
hawthorne's Recent Art & WIP - older WIP wiki some incomplete some finished art
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hawthorne's snow ice and sun photos - photo refer wip wiki
- need to ask for password if interested... sorry its exported I need this
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hawthorne's BD gift to Gato - my newest wip wiki
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mhss08 wipcritique - finished art with the WIP process
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Fae on Catwhisker WIP wiki - finished art with the WIP process
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coffee painting - finished art with the WIP process
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hawthorne's Recent ArtGiftsPhotos - empty at the moment
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Show your WIPs - a collection of ET artists WIP wikis
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2007-01-03 [moira hawthorne]: thx u thx u...

playing today with some photo manips... just fun stuff...

2007-01-03 [moira hawthorne]: traditional christmas,... slicing the turkey!

2007-01-03 [dayah]: kool kool...haven't done much art lately and I need to get back to writing my story..sigh...

2007-01-03 [moira hawthorne]: yes girl...

2007-01-03 [dayah]: hahah thats sooo funny...:P

2007-01-03 [Demon Epona]: O.O Oh my...

2007-01-05 [Leon Silver]: nice pics you do worry me some times

2007-01-05 [moira hawthorne]: who what where why?
I need sleep...
beware of flying dead frogs!

2007-01-05 [Demon Epona]: Flying bloody dead frogs?

2007-01-05 [moira hawthorne]: well it was sortta dry and crunchy.. not bloody

2007-01-05 [dayah]: like how your picture is comming along looking great.

2007-01-05 [moira hawthorne]: thx u... Im workin on Ezra's skin now..

2007-01-05 [moira hawthorne]: any critique?

2007-01-05 [dayah]: I am never good with critique myself...and I am not sure what all you haven't finished yet...if you were finished with Aodh boots I would say some shading...but thats All I could really say...:D

2007-01-05 [moira hawthorne]: Aodh is basically done.. tho im not sure if his skin need more... some bluey shadow and whiter highlights and his flames

the boots are suppose to be vinyl and weird and shiney..

needs a background ofcourse...

and Ezra coloured...

2007-01-19 [~Lady Morgana~]: Cool Moira :D :D :D

2007-03-07 [Lord Dog]: Actually the border of free space doesn't look like it takes away from it at all Maybe increase the size of his face, and have the garland(for lack of a better word start above and below his ears like the tips interupt it and increase the moons

2007-03-07 [moira hawthorne]: I dont know what you mean... sorry and the problem with resizing any parts of it.. is the multible graduate tone of colour that is the b/g

2007-03-07 [Remos Page]: you need some thing new moira ?
that does not have that same face in it lol

2007-03-07 [moira hawthorne]: im tryingh to take the art I like and change the damn proportions and it isnt working well!

2007-03-07 [Remos Page]: <img:stuff/mood14-gif.gif> (ok then) run to the back of the room lol

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